I’ve been insanely busy, and have been wanting to post forever. I finished the Type In on May 4th. Took a few days off to recharge, and I’m 26 pages into the final edit. At least I hope this will be it.
All that’s left are some cuts and tweaks I want to do. I’d like to have it done in a few weeks, but I have no idea how long it will take. The revision, start to finish, took 4 months. Then again, it’s my first one, so there’s a bit of a learning curve.
One Pass Revision is an interesting way to revise. Would I do it this way again? Absolutely, except mine would be something like a Four Pass Revision. I can’t hit it all in one go like Holly Lisle. Maybe with practice, I will someday.
I discovered something interesting. While I was editing, both on paper and on the screen, I was able to see it more clearly. What I mean is that I saw my awkward phrasing and such and was able to correct it. Now when I did some rewriting, I found that I’d already improved just from the One Pass alone. I was able to look at it objectively and see where it needed work. I did alot of awkward phrasing and repetition. So on that count alone, it has helped me tremundously.
Now, looking at the entire draft as a whole, I feel like a sculptor. I have to chip away at the material until it’s final shape reveals itself to me. It’s still a bit elusive. But, you’re thinking, I’ve already done the one four pass, how could I possibly not know?
It’s my process, and it seems to carry into One Pass. I never know everything, even after finishing. I still need to chip away at what’s left. And I have to cut another 28k. I was hoping to get it closer to my goal of 120k, but that just didn’t happen. I have some ideas, though.
Is Pirouette any better? I’m not sure. My gut says yes, this is an improvement, but we never really know until we send it out into the world, do we? I hope.
And I’m getting very antsy to work on something else. Most likely Survivor. I also have a few plotbunnies nipping at my heels, and that’s never good. I figure if I don’t finish Pirouette now, I never will. It’s easy to get into the trap of always writing first drafts and never editing. Editing isn’t easy. In fact, it’s the hardest part in my opinion. The first draft is more for me; the rest are for the world, and with that in mind, it’s tough. ‘Specially when you’re a perfectionist like me. I’m terrified that it won’t be good enough. I’ve put almost 5 years into this book. But whether it gets published or not, I’ve learned so much about my process and the process of editing and revision that it will be worth it regardless.
So, that’s where it’s at.
I recently got an iPod (!) and day-um, talk about inspiration! Music and my muse get along very well. Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Hmm, not sure yet.